It all started when me and my brother and sister where playing a game and the tv just switch straight to the news and it was a special report saying that the ice caps are melting and that they are relocating animals to the USA and only to these states Colorado Arizona and Montana and what animals where going to be in the states Colorado hade polar bears and my sister fainted on the floor and my mom said we are moving to South Dakota and we hade to pack. So tat is the story of how we moved here.
Jackson,
What a tale of how the narrator came to be in South Dakota! I wonder how Polar Bears would fare in a land that is much warmer than their usual habitat?
Keep writing.
Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA
Hi Jackson,
Well done on your entry this week. I like how you explained how you moved to South Dakota. Don’t forget that full stops and punctuation help your reader to read your story more easily.
I wonder how the Polar Bears would survive the move?
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin, Ireland